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I finally dealt with a longstanding problem I've had with the Wizarding world population size. DH spoiler if that's still a problem, but mostly

On her journal, [livejournal.com profile] fernwithy commented that with "about fifty" casualties in the final Hogwarts battle, the effect on the Wizarding world's population, which JKR once stated was "about 3000", would be extreme. Others pointed out that total casualties of the war were much higher, and that it's no doubt how JKR intended it, but that the numbers, especially for population size, do run into JKR's near-complete innumeracy. For instance, Hogwarts has about ten kids per house per year, for 280 total, but there are scattered comments about "200 Slytherins" and such. Moreover, the infrastructure suggests a much larger population.

Because I'm a geek, though, and a biologist, I've always had an additional problem with her population size -- basic ecology. She once commented that the students at Hogwarts were about a quarter purebloods, half halfbloods, and a quarter Muggleborns. That posits a very high rate of Muggleborn wizards, which is supported by the many we meet. The books also state that squibs are very, very rare, which is also supported -- we meet two, and hear vaguely about a third (the Weasley accountant). In other words, the input into this population from outside sources (the Muggle world) is much, much higher than the output to outside sources, yet despite being an ancient population, it's supposed to be incredibly tiny.

So I finally worked out a few numbers. This is a quick calculation, and as such includes several bad but necessary (for this level of analysis) assumptions. They're also the part you should skim over if you're too bored to read this all.

-- Bad assumption number one -- stable population size. Every person gets married once and has two children, or at least the average is close enough to cover this; in other words, every person replaces him or herself in the population of the next generation. Historical events play no significant role in birth or death rates or their role is balanced out. This is least logically true, but I think it could logically be replaced with the assumption that growth rates are equal among different segments of the population; the math would be harder.
-- Bad assumption number two -- no social implications to childbearing. Muggle families, wizard families, and mixed Muggle-wizard families all obey this equally.
-- Bad assumption number three -- rates of genetic 'anomalies' are constant. With stable population size, we'll go with 10 new Muggleborn students per year, every year, or one-quarter of Harry's class. For squibs, we'll go with constant 0.5% squib offspring.
-- Bad assumption number four -- except for the constant squib rate mentioned above, all children of Wizard-Muggle matches are wizards. If this weren't true, wizard-Muggle marriages would be very rare and heavily discouraged by wizards of *all* political leanings. Both squibs and Muggleborns are equally likely to occur without regard to the ancestry of the parents.
-- Bad assumption number five -- the proportion of wizards marrying Muggles is constant. For Harry's year, we've said half the kids are halfbloods. I'll be generous and assume that most of those are "halfbloods" the way Harry is, with both parents actually wizards already, but with one a Muggleborn or within a couple generations of one. The remaining handful are halfbloods like Voldemort, with one Muggle parent. For relative simplicity, I went with one-fifth of "halfbloods", or 10% of the total population, having one Muggle parent. In reverse, 10% of wizards marry Muggles. That seems high to me for such an isolated population, but it does seem to happen often in the books.

So the actual math. To pick real numbers to work with, I started again with the numbers from Harry's year, but using a cohort of a decade (this is less a bad assumption and more inexact math, because despite the way I'm typing this, I really didn't put *that* much effort into it), and a starting cohort population size of 400. However, I moved them backwards in history for perspective. Specifically, I moved our 400 wizards to 1689. Why? That's when the International Statute for Secrecy was signed, which seems to give a starting point for "modern" wizarding history. So that was 309 years before the end of the series (1998), or 12 generations of 25.75 years each. (I calculated 25 yr generations, then rounded.)

We start with 400 wizards, including 100 Muggleborns. Forty of them will marry Muggles, 360 will marry each other, for 220 total marriages. They'll have 440 kids, two of whom will be squibs. The rest will be joined in their generation by 100 more Muggleborns, for a first-generation cohort of 538 kids. Follow this for twelve generations.

Result, or 'the important part': Our 1689 population of 400 wizards born in a decade has become 3251 wizards in 1998. Roughly an eight-fold increase in population. Figure the old ages and young deaths balance out to an average life span of eighty years, and our British wizarding population went from 3200 people to just over 26,000. That's still pretty small actually. Except. Assumption number one -- constant population size. In 1700, the population of Britain was 5 million people. Our 3200 wizards were 0.064% of the population, or 1 out of every 1560 people. In 1998, our 26,000 wizards are 0.52% of the population, or 1 out of fewer than 200 people. If more wizards marry Muggles or fewer squibs are born, these numbers grow considerably.

That's a population more in line with the infrastructure we see in the books, but way too big to account for the 'everyone knows/is related to everyone' nature of the books, not to mention for one seven-year school of 1000 students, much less of 280. Moreover, given the dramatic nature of this population, that strikes me as getting unfeasible to hide, and maybe even so in the actual British population of about 60 million.

And the time frame problem. The wizarding world hardly began in 1689, which was my fairly arbitrary starting point. Hogwarts was founded "more than 1000 years ago", and Ollivander's goes back to 386 BC or so. Using the same rates and assumptions (certain of which get *very* unfeasible at this point), I ran this to 40 generations, or 1000 years. I didn't start with our 400 wizard cohort, but a 100 wizard cohort, which would also be the start point for *all* Muggleborns at the rate I'm using. In that case, by 1998, the total wizarding population would be 334,700, with each year at Hogwarts having over 4100 students. Out of our theoretically constant population of 5,000,000.

As I said, a lot of these numbers are arbitrary, and I admit they discount a whole lot of factors, but I hope the basic point comes through that a tiny population doesn't work if it's existed for a long span of time and has lots of people entering it as Muggleborns or halfbloods and comparatively few leaving it via squibdom. Oh, and huzzah for Excel and copy/paste. And oh my God did that get vastly out of hand.

Date: 2007-08-25 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atdelphi.livejournal.com
*joins in the geekery* This was a fascinating read. I've always said that JKR is a great world-crafter (it's what makes us all want to play with her characters) but she's a lousy world-builder. The wizarding world would be much easier to fudge had she left things more vague, but her propensity for throwing out details in canon and interviews to give it realism usually has the opposite effect of highlighting how little internal logic holds it all together. I wouldn't be such a stickler myself if we were talking about a stand-alone book, when you're dealing with a septology, the inconsistencies do niggle, don't they?

Date: 2007-08-25 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arclevel.livejournal.com
Oh, my god, you actually *read* all that?!

Yes, I agree precisely with the worldbuilding problem. I can get around the little things where numbers don't add up with a sigh and a quick eye roll, but it's like she's simultaneously describing two entirely different wizarding worlds. Even without being a fic writer myself, I mentally organize my image of the world I'm dealing with, and that's hard to do with blatant inconsistencies. It's not that I expect her to have every detail precisely worked out, but you'd think a little issue like the *size* of the school where >80% of the first six books take place would be something she'd have a relatively consistent grasp on. (There are other internal things that jar me out of a story as well, such as Harry asking Hermione in fifth or sixth year to identify someone he's taken classes with for the last five/six years, but that's neither here nor there.)

And the little details she throws out in interviews and such *usually* have the effect of complicating things, highlighting (or confirming) problems, or otherwise actually detracting from the book. And at best, they still limit the possibilities for fans to play. Mostly, that's our problem here in fandom, but certainly there are plenty of other people out there who like to imagine things in a certain way, or who've always pictured things one way, before she helpfully told them exactly how they should think about each aspect of the book. (Yes, I still hate all the interviews. Did you catch the post-DH bit where she claimed Muggleborns are descendents of wizards, which not only makes no sense given the rarity of squibs, but also completely undermines at least half the major themes of the books?)

Date: 2007-08-25 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
I read it too - and I think that you are right - she sometimes looks as though she has no real idea of the place she is writing about when it comes to population size.

Date: 2007-08-25 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atdelphi.livejournal.com
*laughs* I read all that with great pleasure - I love fandom commentary and I love popular science, so I love this sort of examination.

I wonder sometimes if this business doesn't stem from JKR's admitted viewing of herself as "outside" mainstream fantasy. She doesn't seem to have read much fantasy outside of Tolkien, Lewis, and such, and so doesn't seem know the importance of solid world-building the way more in-depth fantasy/sci-fi fans pick up on it. Making a timeline isn't just good sense for someone who's writing a seven-book series that includes several generations, but it's essential pre-writing that would have dodged such issues as the contradiction of when Dumbledore became headmaster, the puzzle of Ogg/Pringle/the elder Weasleys' ages, and the mess of all four of Harry's grandparents dropping dead in a ten year span for unexplained reasons, to name just a very few.

I think a major weakness (stemming from a major strength) is the way the books matured along with Harry. While Harry and friends grew, the wizarding world remained largely stalled in the cartooniness of the first books, making a suspension of disbelief more difficult. Once the kids are old enough to be thinking about careers, the fact that they haven't had an English or Math class since age ten becomes more pressing, as does the fuzziness of how the adult world works beyond the walls of Hogwarts. It's nice to say that the genders are equal in the wizarding world, but unless you sit down and think about how that will make it different from our world, it loses its meaning (hint: there should not be rampant sexual double-standards, Mrs. Weasley's homemaking and the family's poverty make no sense in context, and all the powerful women we meet should not be single and childless.) Plus, your hero looks stupid if he doesn't even think to ask his father's friends what his parents did for a living.

(Yes, I still hate all the interviews. Did you catch the post-DH bit where she claimed Muggleborns are descendents of wizards, which not only makes no sense given the rarity of squibs, but also completely undermines at least half the major themes of the books?)

It gets better. JKR once asserted in an interview that magical ability was a "dominant, resilient gene." *puts on Morbo voice* GENETICS DO NOT WORK THAT WAY! Frankly, I think a lot was lost thematically in the last book that really could have been solved with a little pre-writing. I love the series, of course, but I think overall it suffered a lot for its popularity. Had JKR had a stand-alone novel or two under her belt first, and had there not been so much pressure to get the series finished and published as soon as possible, the books might have found their potential.

Date: 2007-08-25 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildfyre.livejournal.com
Would it help at all if the squib population were roughly the same as the muggleborn? We could argue that perhaps families are ashamed of squibs (which seems to be alluded to by the rumours surrounding Ariana) so perhaps we don't get a true picture of how many there are. Or something.

Why yes, I am grasping at straws. JKR may come up with some great ideas and characters and such, but the reason I don't see her as a true fantasy writer is that her world just doesn't make sense. I don't think she counted on the existence of people so sad and geeky that they would accept magic and dragons and Horcruxes without question but inaccurate population models???? OMG! :p

Date: 2007-08-25 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellecain.livejournal.com
This was a really interesting read! Some of your conclusions make a lot of sense - especially the part about a fast growing population that is unfeasible to hide. That would explain some of the problems I've been having with the books. However it does raise some more issues - like how do a staff less than 20 teachers manage to teach 4100 kids in each year? I've always assumed that the population must be really *tiny* given that the number of teachers was so pitiful. Accepting the numbers you've got above makes it really difficult to believe Hogwarts is the only school in the entire country.

Also I take my hat off to you for raising the bar of HP geekery. :-)

Date: 2007-08-26 06:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
Very interesting. I have to admit that population size isn't one of the things that I think about, but now that you mention it, it does seem a little wrong. Particularly the fact that there are wizards everywhere in the world, but only two other schools in Europe, as GoF suggests.

Date: 2007-08-27 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eir-de-scania.livejournal.com
"JKR is a great world-crafter (it's what makes us all want to play with her characters) but she's a lousy world-builder."

I couldn't agree more, atdelphi! And,yes, she creates fantastic characters even if her plot points make them incredible stupid at times!

What drives me around the bend is that she spent years on planning and plotting a seven-book series, filling notebook after notebook with - what, exactly? Not with facts about the wizworld, it seems. The personal history of the main characters? Not enough to give a straight answer to one of the main one's career, obviously. The plot? She does a better job here, but DH feels like she's banging round pegs in square holes with a sledgehammer.

It's a pity, I like the books but I wish there weren't so many WTF moments. Not just for me...

Here from Fernwithy's LJ, BTW:

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